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You're the turquoise twilight
And lilac cloud breaks
And crawling winter shades of pale
Like glowing branches from the new moon

And you carve the night for me
In soft silver lines
Through the ambush woods
To true north and home
©2009 *SameOldSongs
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Author's Comments

She's as beautiful as those churning, crawling, just after sunset evenings that still dapple light across the world and let us wander like wayward children in careless summer nights.

She's whispers of stone and green Aegean empires; a fair skinned siren across marble temple.

She keeps hours in a jar of minutes, and days in a bag of hours; and time with her is just symbols in the minds of the lost and the found who have woken from the dream we can't seem to shake (and never want to).

She lights the way and keeps me as I travel lonely roads, and reminds me always that they aren't so lonely.

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:iconwharf-rats:
This is amazingly beautiful. Stunning imagery and pace, its so lovely and sweet. Shes one lucky lady :) :heart:

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Everything I do I rush through
So that I can do
Something else.
:iconsameoldsongs:
Thank you so much, and I'm an even luckier man.

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"A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world"

-Oscar Wilde
:iconpyromaniac8390:
Very creative how you moved the poem into the comments box. Yes, this is a very beautiful poem.

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"Catch the Mist, Catch the Myth, Catch the Mystery, Catch the Drift"
:iconsameoldsongs:
Thank you so much.

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"A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world"

-Oscar Wilde
:icondolphina7:
your comments were just as beautiful as the deviation....and now i'm realizing you probably planned it that way... Still love it ^^

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Being a coward is being brave enough to run away
-Terry Pratchett
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If you cried when Axel faded, think Demyx has a heart, and that Marluxia is ghey/fabulous, copy and paste this into your signature.
:iconsameoldsongs:
Thank you :aww: :giggle:

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"A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world"

-Oscar Wilde
:iconpyromaniac8390:
no problem!

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"Catch the Mist, Catch the Myth, Catch the Mystery, Catch the Drift"
:iconndean:
wonderful

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And the pen scribbled forever more
:iconsameoldsongs:
Thank you so much.

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"A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world"

-Oscar Wilde

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